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I am surprised at the low score on this track... It should be in the 4s! The one suggestion is to take that "Drops over bitches" part. I love that line but it sort of ruined the drop. I would incorporate that saying somewhere else in the track.
Great work!

AxTekk responds:

Thanks! I think just the act of putting "SJD" on any song gets you zero bombed though lol.

Special thanks for the creative crit, if you ever want any back, want to collab or just shoot the shit feel free to hit me up breh

Excellent! I must say, he pluck you used it absolutely amazing. It was really sharp but also had muffled sound to it (filtered?). Great work. I like the break-in at around 3:00. That was awesome! Good job, keep up the good work.

D-J-A responds:

Yep the pluck is filtered-and I opened the filter at the break :).

Thanks a lot for the review!

So this is overall a pretty cool idea. I thought it was great. But... You either compressed this track a little to much or have to much base. My Studio Monitors and my DJ Headphones both crack and the bass sucks out the melody of the song. Other than that, it was pretty great.

MCDefective responds:

Yeah I bass boosted it and compressed it pretty hard.

This was a very interesting track... Different all the others. I like the idea! My only suggestion is you should really work on your mixing and mastering. The song doesn't sound compressed, the guitar isn't think enough, your snare is a little loud (not sure if I even like the sound). Don't get me wrong, I really liked this. It just needs mixing work is all.

KKSlider60 responds:

I. Hate. FL.
KKS

I really like the idea of this track. The one thing I did notice is the Sidechain or whatever was really loud. It goes to quiet then to loud. I'd turn down those pads. Other than that, it was a plessure to listen to!

RedVelvetSquared responds:

Why thank you :D

Killer percussion dude... I understand how hard it is to create percussion like that. I'm impressed, it sounds like something from one of Hans Zimmers tracks!

RiverK responds:

Thanks sir! It's almost never deliberate. Always experimenting.

This is a great composition man! I can easily seeing this track being a backround track for a game. I'm not sure why it is listed under trance... This is definitely more Techno than trance.

586rick responds:

I put it in trance because is nothing like big techno its more calm thats why thanks for the review

Great composition. But... I'm never a fan of Submissions that are fake guitars and listed under Heavy Metal. Heavy Metals most important instrument is GUITAR! A REAL ONE! Anyways... I really really like this. Reminds of a bit of Children of Bodom and Nightwish. The guitar should be also louder. And I love to hear some percussion in this!
Good job.

musicislight2 responds:

Thanks!

Until I can find band members (only have a pianist/songwriter and vocalist so far) I just make all of my compositions on FL studio so it's kinda hard to get real-sounding instruments. Hopefully one day that will change! Also, I'm glad that it reminded you of Nightwish because I got a lot of inspiration from them.

Thanks for taking the time to review!

This is my main account for tracks that have been completely finished. My other accounts: J-N-R, Jnr1114

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USA, WA State

Joined on 12/13/12

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